I've got other proofreading notes, but this is the largest one (and that's pretty good
> 14.31 When playing with 5-7 players the following commodity cards
> are used Clay, Hides (1), ...
The mix here is half western and half eastern (at least according to the chart under 9.1. I was thinking it might be interesting to have a variation for eastern-only or western-only. Minor variation, though, with no net effect.
> 14.32 When playing 8-11 players the following commodities are added
> to the deck: Currency (1), ...
From browsing the forums, looks like Currency has been replaced with Bone (as it has in section 9.1).
> 14.33 When playing with 12-15 players the following cards are used
> and split up into two trade card sets - East and West. Set up each
> set as listed in 14.31 with the following Trade cards being placed
> on the Western set: ...
> Oil, Grain (4)
---- from 9.1, should be Wool, Oil (4)
> Glass, Livestock (5)
---- from 9.1, should be Wine, Textiles (5)
> Resin, Herbs (7)
---- from 9.1, should be Resin, Inscense (7)
> .... being placed on the Eastern set: ...
> Wool, Oil (4)
---- from 9.1, Cotton, Sugar (4)
> ...
And 14.34 has a reference to Currency that I'm guessing needs to be replaced with Bone.